Peer Review 2

Hi Zahra

The blog was very entertaining, and I loved Ta Ta at the end. You have described the Upper-Class so well, and the story flows perfectly. You have the concept of the Upper-Class society. The church was essential to them and was a central part of the week.

A few minor things I picked up, two spelling mistakes

Ideals / Ideas, and Beuaty / Beauty 

The other I’m not sure as I read on what class you were talking about. You start with the Upper-Class with servants, then change to Middle-Class with cooking and cleaning.

I can see you have the concept on most of your blog. Hope to read more.

Keep writing

Jenny

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  1. Thankyou Jenny! I’ve purposely chosen the word ideals but I have gone ahead and corrected beauty. I also added some further commentary in brackets regarding the cooking and cleaning because it is supposed so be based on the first class throughout, so thanks for pointing out the confusion!

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